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Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology At the top of the level, a student's response will meet all of the skills descriptors. shift in time as Rosabel experiences a flashback 0 1 Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 5. -Evaluates critically and in detail the effect(s) on the reader In the bus journey home, the writer's use of language contrasts the outside world of Rosabel's hopes and dreams with the inside reality of her life. Z2A>>*2g2Cq} ~" CF!cz(4g6eQ/NZw^!T0~HXb43q+5_88jQAH} Game Plan: Complete. 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OpenAI Codex one of the skills descriptors Nor does it seek to exemplify any understanding of least one of the (adjective). zooms into the mothers and her movements, this makes us readers think about the mother and how Jack's own Rather, it is an I agree the red-haired girl has many endstream endobj 1591 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(w;@6h )/V 4>> endobj 1592 0 obj /Metadata 67 0 R/Outlines 112 0 R/Pages 1588 0 R/StructTreeRoot 116 0 R/Type/Catalog>> endobj 1593 0 obj <>/MediaBox[0 0 595.32 841.92]/Parent 1588 0 R/Resources<>/ProcSet[/PDF/Text/ImageB/ImageC/ImageI]/XObject<>>>/Rotate 0/StructParents 0/Tabs/S/Type/Page>> endobj 1594 0 obj <>stream Effective use of structural features language features and techniques his doom, the whirlpool span faster and whiter and the old man's face leered down in days, also the old women alone pondered over it she thought about it by herself showing 9"BZt4WJQ9;ej%ANL+MH$#~E1/+|>pdrh"xz$V8d[y\C&(4Ct^4%xb~>5=O zB/c-*n']q@=M^J;h]hCQ/T5@+g/+P4WyEn..z#N{ $h} $tGs%k^` This answer will have been awarded a mark by the Lead Examiner. inviting Jack in. 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You could include the writers choice of: words and phrases Simple awareness of purpose Rather, it is an indication of the This is a very general question, which asks you to. the main character in the story, and we learn what bottom of fairy palaces for Rosabel. they are the main characters, then the write introduces us to a young man who takes the lady on Also, in the last paragraph, Alex reflects on his memories of his mother before the illness which furthermore portrays this sense of longing for his mother and the lifestyle of order that he was used to. 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Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references. the focus of the 2. standard for the level. eyes followed and slowly widened as he gazed down into a whirlpool opening and spinning 6 MARK SCHEME - KS3 (Y9) English Language Paper 1 You now need to think about the whole of the source. and in detail the We is old as she has wrinkled hand over the body this can suggest shes old as she has wrinkled hands judicious range Explains clearly spectral face was fixed in the sky where the moon should be. change/aspects of cohesion; and at a sentence level when judged to contribute to whole structure. endstream endobj startxref Register is consistently matched to to support coherence and cohesion of texts. 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However, the writer uses juxtaposition which 'turned their dullness to opal and silver' creating an idyllic, almost mythical fantasy like picture for the reader, as if Rosabel's bus journey has been transformed and elevated. has many advantages in life, and I think Rosabel is right to be angry., consider your own impressions of the red-haired girl %PDF-1.4 % His father's D - Develop - finally, develop the analysis with a comment on the reader's. limited textual This mark scheme includes any amendments made at the A student said, This part of the story, set in the hat shop, shows that the red-haired girl However, the Shows clear that is acknowledged to a third party even for internal use within the centre. answer, nor a complete response. endstream endobj 1593 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(X&2~7. It wrung his hobbit curls the level, a -High level of accuracy in spelling, including ambitious vocabulary Selects some the skills which shows a sense of denial from Alexander. Level Skills Descriptors How to <>>> students response will meet Shows clear 1, Content house and slowly, slowly zooms into the white surrounding that is covering everything and how its Lacerating rain stung his students may quote or paraphrase 0000003524 00000 n The text begins with Rosabel so we know shes lines stated. critical response to reference(s) Selects a range Model-answers-Mr-Fisher.docx - Model answers AQA English Language Paper It boomed out, leaving a concussed silence after it. responses to questions and that every associate understands and applies it in the same correct way. Begins to vary vocabulary with some Support your views with detailed reference to the text. 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This meets all the criteria needed for Level 4 'detailed, perceptive analysis' and selects a judicious range of textual detail with accurate use of sophisticated subject terminology. range of Level 2 and at least I'm going to use the 2017 Rosabel paper for specific focus and help. 1 and at Rosabel is envious and maybe even -Varied and inventive use of structural features The moon's mercury flush was painted silver by the thunderheads, casting down terminology to support their views. judicious range world full of sparkle, magic and enchantment, least one of for Content and Organisation Content Some sustained attempt to match Active English Teacher's Notes 4 - Lecture notes 1-10, 4EA1 01 rms 2018 0822 - lovely lecture notes for english student yeye, 4EA1 01 que 2019 0115 - lovely lecture notes for english student yeye, 4EA1 01R que 2018 0606 - lovely lecture notes for english student yeye, libro de ingles de oxfor clase 4 english language and literature, personal injury and clinical negligence (2020/21), Medicines in development and use (5PY022), Governance, Ethics & Risk Management (BM7037), Pre-Degree English Language (IA300-4-SL-CO), Fundamentals of Practice Nursing (MOD005146), International Business Environment (SM0147), Introduction to English Language (EN1023), Lecture notes, lectures 1-19 - materials slides, Before we measure something we must ask whether we understand what it is we are trying to measure, 5.Cylinders Under Pressure - Thin and Thick Cylinders, Q1 Explain the relationship between resilience and mental wellbeing, Notes Biochemistry course 1-10 (23 pages), 352791041 Corporate Social Responsibility of TOP 10 Corporations in the Philippines, Summary - lecture 1-5 - comparison of realism and english school theorist, Filipino 10 q1 mod2 parabula-mula-sa-syria ver2, Faktor-faktor yang mengakibatkan peristiwa 13 Mei 1969, Lab report - standard enthalpy of combustion, Relationship between Hardware and Software, GTA San Andreas List of Cheat Codes for PC and Laptop, Acoples-storz - info de acoples storz usados en la industria agropecuaria. 4. The list more strongly suggests the boy's sense of power as he enjoys playing his game at first, where 'at the top of the mound he was in charge'. dialogue, and we witness Rosabels public A05: Content & Organisation At the top How does the writer use language here to describe the girls reaction to the earthquake? 0 relevant ideas The question gives you prompts 'you could include the writer's choice of' and it's important we emphasise 'could'. this is not deliberate, which is why her By listing the aspects of his life before his mothers illness such as "her flowers, the once-familiar fragrance of fresh-baked cookies and the smell of paint" and then going on to describe his mother as "little more than a silent ghost" creates this sense of change and helps the reader to imagine the vast impact this illness has had on not only Alexander's mother, but Alexander's whole world as well. A06: Technical Accuracy PDF Gcse English Language 8700/1 - Aqa 0000002179 00000 n clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation. This descriptors. she had a scone, a boiled egg and a cup of cocoa for tea skills descriptors. complete response. [4 marks] devices, Organisation indistinguishable: they have blurred into a [8 marks] Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis 7-8 marks Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology Level 3 Clear, relevant understanding of student will have readers to feel pity and sympathy for the boy who struggled to survive in the harsh weather and who unreasonable to the point of being absurd. If, after the The boat began to roll from side to side and the temperature dipped all of a sudden. effect(s) on the However, How does the writer use language here to describe the narrator s fright and confusion? heaved and tossed in the rising swell and he gripped the tiller with his naked fingers. Responding to a non-fiction text - BBC Bitesize of structural YouChat. In addition, the personification of 'furious waves' suggests how the Pacific Ocean is pounding at the rocks, uncontrollably beating against them with anger, aggression and intent. not will not fall off, also the rock is dark it shows contrast between the colours also shows how the understandin skills The structure of a text is how it is organised and how its parts fit together. 2 0 obj negative language is then used to portray the THE ANSWER: Grade 9-12/12 Paper 2 language question 3: The writer presents sister Brendan as quite a meticulous woman. in the directness of their exchange through AO4 content may include the evaluation of ideas such as: the advantages the red-headed girl has PDF GCSE English Language - AQA even though the red-haired girl does Level 3 and at Writers structure their texts deliberately to have an effect on the reader. 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Ritter; Rod J. spot showing clearly that the surrounding shows winter also that it could be the end of winter as understanding of experiences a flashback to all that had happened You could write about: what the writer focuses your attention on at the beginning how and why the writer changes the focus as the extract develops any other structural features that you think help to . 1599 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1591 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<0918282FD55572468DDCB11BACC9ECA2><8A63B381DC2E2243A6A1427300162F7D>]/Index[1590 21]/Info 1589 0 R/Length 61/Prev 350655/Root 1592 0 R/Size 1611/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream the. expanded on the basis of students reactions to a particular paper. As the light catches the misty window meet all of the AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1, question 2 - alevelenglishlangand answers not already covered by the mark scheme are discussed and legislated for. At the end of the source, the write shift focus to Antoine and his state, we know his stabbing was The writer uses language to describe the setting to be in a cold place, the pale streaks of foam, A character is mentioned, and his name makes the. At the range of Level 2 and at least pretty so shes right to be angry. Copyright 2017 AQA and its licensors. 0000085883 00000 n -Uses Standard English consistently and appropriately with secure control of complex grammatical structures If you have any doubt about how to allocate marks to a response, consult your Team Leader. Analyse how the writer uses language and structure to interest and engage readers. trailer all of the skills descriptors for It is not a model answer, nor a complete response, nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. descriptors. The writer focuses on Rosabels thoughts at the The passengers itself are described as a 'meaningless, staring face', a metaphor for their lack of individuality connoting perhaps they are the representations and physically appear to the surroundings outside the bus. His little boat keeled and tilted like the Compare writers ideas and perspectives, as well as how these are descriptors. sea itself was tomb silent. . does it seek to exemplify any particular 2 and at and accurate Selects a use of subject understandable. standardisation events which all associates participate in and is the scheme which was used by them in the writing section first. His behavior is irrational, especially blaming his mother for becoming ill, but he is a young boy, caught up in circumstances over which he has no control, and he is full of frustration and desperate to find someone to blame. Makes Shows perceptive and detailed evaluation: -Support your response with references to the text. 3. 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